My breath splits
at the tip of your nose,
slips down your cheekbones,
My gasps vanish
between the gaps in your teeth
I recount,
As you push your face into mine,
And scavenge for magic in my mouth,
how our lips locked so well yesterday
and today,
as you wave my tongue
like it was created
for your consumption,
your appetite bobs off my face
like a ball of oil trying to dive in water.
I wonder
if it were my lips that changed their shape
or your intentions,
your frenzies
or my apprehensions?
I wonder
if you realize the lump in your throat
if you realize the lump in your throat
is a lie I keep choking on,
and that my lips
and that my lips
don't belong to you
just because you have touched them
with your lips before.
Intriguing line spacing; is each line supposed to be a stanza? Asking because the last two seem to form their own couplet/stanza.
ReplyDeleteLove the visceral, very physical imagery.
Arrange this into stanzas. Will be stronger that way.
ReplyDeleteThank you Akhil. I remember you giving me all that feedback. I did make the changes that you suggested but would love for you to read them again. I'll email you.
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